from the milkyway
does it matter
the stars burned out
from the milkyway”
Oh what a great line!
I so envy you your ability to do that, did I ever tell you? You rock. 🙂
LOL, thank you….I think you are pretty incredible yourself. Mom, wife, editor, teacher, and how many blogs do you have going? Yes, incredible.
it does not matter.
cute piece, lovely word flow.
I agree, it doesn’t matter at all. 😉
I couldnt help but read this out of order. Each of these lines are somewhat interchangeable with the others. Each combination of phrases rendered a whole new picture. Nice work kiddo!
Nice catch. Those lines have been kicking around in my head for about a year and a half so I finally just through them together. I wasn’t really sure what others would think but needed the space. Really enjoyed reading some of your recent works Jamie. Don’t stop, you’ve found your voice.
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