we think we live
in an economy of time
but we live
in an economy of moments
oddย system
no bartering
no trade
how spent
earning luxury
etching fame
easing pain
embracing others
lifetimes of moments
in short time
squander them
hanging on tomorrows
reliving yesterdays
or relish today
regardless of time
only moments
in the end
February 5th, 2010 at 10:06 am
wonderfully done. each moment is a trade off of something we could be doing for what we are doing and who we are doing it with. great truth in there.
February 5th, 2010 at 5:08 pm
Always a trade off…so true.
February 5th, 2010 at 11:37 am
I totally love and understand the message in your inspiring words. Time is a gift we need often. ๐
February 5th, 2010 at 5:08 pm
time with. ๐
February 5th, 2010 at 12:47 pm
wow,
what a deep and far-sighted version.
I am impressed,
loved the magical word paint in your poem.
Happy Friday, ๐
February 5th, 2010 at 5:08 pm
Have a perfect weekend J!
February 5th, 2010 at 1:36 pm
you’re singing one of my favorite songs in this poem…love it.
February 5th, 2010 at 5:09 pm
Sometimes I forget the tune. ๐
February 5th, 2010 at 2:50 pm
Each hour, 60 golden minutes, each moment a jewel. They are so precious and we squander them like we have an endless supply. Great reminder to be as wise with our time as we try to be with our dollars. Well done. ๐
February 5th, 2010 at 5:10 pm
You were on the edge of poetic again. When will I see an update on Poetical Ness? ๐ Happy weekend!
February 6th, 2010 at 12:52 am
Oh, it reminded me of something I read years ago in a Little House book, something Ma said to Laura but I couldn’t remember it.
Not sure when I’ll have updates there! I’ve been trying to think of things but it’ll probably be a bit. I’ll put my thinking cap on – and thanks for being so supportive. *hugs*
February 6th, 2010 at 3:05 pm
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February 5th, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Jamie:
What amazing gift U Have,
U entertain Us with such beautiful poem.
God Bless U,
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February 6th, 2010 at 3:06 pm
Thank you J! Blessings back at you. ๐
February 5th, 2010 at 11:43 pm
I have no budget for either money or time. I wonder what bargaining I could do with what I do have? ๐
February 6th, 2010 at 3:06 pm
You like to haggle, don’t you? lol
February 6th, 2010 at 1:30 am
oH Yes moments marks the time as good or bad. I try to live every moment in peace.
Lateral Thinking
How good are you at thinking out-of-the-box?
http://www.3smartcubes.com/pages/tests/lateral-1/lateral-1_instructions.asp
February 6th, 2010 at 3:07 pm
Peace is a wonderful goal Tasneem.
February 6th, 2010 at 4:50 am
very nicely said Jaymie…
fits neatly for me..
February 6th, 2010 at 3:07 pm
Good to hear and wonderful to see you!
February 6th, 2010 at 10:19 am
Happy Saturday!
Stay Cool, ๐
February 6th, 2010 at 3:08 pm
Another storm is rolling in…staying cool for sure! ๐
February 6th, 2010 at 11:45 am
Dearest Jaime,
I have an award for you.
Please kindly accept it.
http://justmeshakira.wordpress.com/2010/02/07/sunshine-award-from-william/
hugs
shakira
February 6th, 2010 at 3:13 pm
Thank you for the wonderful award!!
February 6th, 2010 at 5:09 pm
I like the words that you used it to creat such a beautiful poem,my friend!
10X for share it! ๐
Have a special day!
February 6th, 2010 at 10:45 pm
You have a wonderful day also!!
February 7th, 2010 at 5:41 am
Oh! Be Thrifty is really, really good, Jaymie! Every moment of it!
February 7th, 2010 at 10:47 am
Moments. ๐
February 7th, 2010 at 7:34 pm
Defining moments defining us.
February 7th, 2010 at 10:34 pm
Seems like sometimes time lets us forget.
February 7th, 2010 at 9:51 pm
Time is an expensive illusion.
February 7th, 2010 at 10:35 pm
You know it!
February 8th, 2010 at 12:11 pm
beautifully done,
it is cool to reread it…
Happy Monday!
February 8th, 2010 at 12:12 pm
I guess I should go muse wrangling today, lol.
February 11th, 2010 at 7:49 am
This is something that is in the forefront of my mind. “I think, I want”! However, I’m trying to change from this consumeristic mindset and live a greener life. Thank u for sharing this & validating my need to do this. ~I.S.
February 11th, 2010 at 3:36 pm
A challenge for all of us. ๐
February 15th, 2010 at 7:11 am
we think we live
in an economy of time
but we live
in an economy of moments
loved the beginning so very much,
I feel loved when I see u appear in my blog…
Glad to find u,
I am excited about u being with me and others…
February 15th, 2010 at 8:04 am
We are part of an amazing group of poets. ๐
February 15th, 2010 at 7:11 am
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glad that u tried those links…
February 15th, 2010 at 8:04 am
Loved the links!
February 16th, 2010 at 5:41 pm
glad 4 what u did!
I am lonely and helpless with u, him, and their support!
We R ONE!
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February 16th, 2010 at 9:04 pm
Have a beautiful night J. ๐
February 16th, 2010 at 5:47 pm
i love this, but with that said.. i love everything you write.
thank you so much for the honor you left in comment form on a poem i had written… kreative posts? ๐ i have started it but with everything i take time to truly take advantage and answer respectfully… i simply wanted to let you know it meant a lot and came at a time well needed.
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February 16th, 2010 at 9:06 pm
I always stop in and read but often feel like I am intruding on a private moment. Your writing amazes me. So honest.
February 19th, 2010 at 11:33 am
u r nominated for week 6.
happy 4 u.
February 23rd, 2010 at 7:56 am
how exciting! Thank you!!
February 22nd, 2010 at 2:32 pm
Good stuff, Jayme. Love those first lines,
“we think we live
in an economy of time
but we live
in an economy of moments”
The true words of a poet-philosopher!
February 23rd, 2010 at 7:54 am
A good mix, yes?
July 6th, 2010 at 6:27 pm
This is lovely. Well done.