the screaming silence
solitude on a hilltop
guru out to lunch
Out to lunch! Ha! That’s awesome.
… Uh, wait. I mean … the sophisticated construct works well juxtaposed against the whimsical nature of the wording; while somewhat jarring, as in a good and well-told joke, the poetry is …
Oh, heck with it. I’m no critic. This was cute and funny!
The complexity of simplicity! I wonder what kind of food the guru would be eating? Manna possibly.
Try a haiku Paul – I think you might like working with form – it is like computer stuff. 😉
Awesome!! Loved reading this.. speacially, the screaming silence that describes the solitude on the hill top!
Hee hee hee…love the word play!
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