Cinquain Aim

October 25, 2009

weekend

fleeting days

laughing, enjoying, immersing

never last long enough

Sunday

Posted by Jaymie
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22 Responses to “Cinquain Aim”

  1. DarcKnyt Says:

    October 25, 2009 at 11:25 pm

    *Sigh* How true. Even if I don’t have a good reason to hate short weekends and Monday right now.

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    • Jaymie Says:

      October 26, 2009 at 8:47 am

      It’s weird…on weekdays folks keep looking to their watch, on the weekend they glance at the sky. Seems to put a different spin on everything. ;-)

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  2. shraddha Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 7:56 am

    looks like you had great weekend! what fun!
    we took girls to a Halloween party!! girls are dizzy with all the candy they own after the trick or treat!

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  3. steve Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 9:26 am

    Weekend? Oh, those last couple days! Sandy got all the attention! :) Kinda glad to be at ‘work’.
    Good one, as always Jaymie!

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  4. Jaymie Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 9:37 am

    Thanks Steve. I was inspired by Calliope’s Pen to try a cinquain. I’ve got my puppy Leroy right next to me now – he loves to cuddle up when I am at the keyboard. Have a great week Steve!

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  5. blissbait Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 10:20 am

    what does ‘cinquain’ mean
    leaving here i’ll go google
    gifter of new words!

    I’m guessing it’s that type of poem? That makes a design? Like the diamond of Your weekend poem because it held as much value to You as a diamond would to another? :) :) :)

    Off to explore….

    Thanks You and Cheers!

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  6. DarcsFalcon Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 2:08 pm

    Time is ever fleeting – but it seems more fleeting on weekends somehow. Good job on this. :)

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  7. Charles Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 2:37 pm

    i used to have a friend who used to teach these on a poetry post. she always tried to convince me to write them because of my brevity. they are certainly a step above hi-koos and i’d rather read these. yet i never really tried to write them myself,

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  8. Jaymie Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 2:47 pm

    I like to try new things once in a while. I think your readers are content with things just as they are Charles. ;-)

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  9. Doraz Says:

    October 26, 2009 at 7:59 pm

    I try to make it the weekend all week long! Love the reality of your post! :) Happy week”end!”

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  10. purple Says:

    October 27, 2009 at 12:03 am

    hi Jaymie, if you could just delete the other two previous comments I left and check out shadowpoetry.com … I would appreciate it.

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  11. calliopespen Says:

    October 27, 2009 at 7:08 am

    I’m not sure which I like more–the poem itself or your comment back to Darc. Both are awesome.

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  12. Jaymie Says:

    October 27, 2009 at 7:36 am

    You crack me up too! :lol:

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  13. Belle Says:

    October 28, 2009 at 12:44 am

    Reading some of the comments, I figured out what Cinquain is… I appreciate what you wrote even more now! What a neat idea… and how true your words are to a working girl still trying to get caught up on commenting (see, I’m not really stalking you, lol). :)

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